This
short novel is a good debut effort for a teen author. Chapelway has a
good sense of creating an ongoing story line. It kept my attention
throughout. She has crafted some interesting characters too.
Chelsea,
her twin brother and two others find out they have each been
traveling to medieval Amar through a portal. They go together and are
immediately thrust into a dangerous adventure. It seems their fathers
had been there and had left on an important journey, never to return.
(The fathers are safe in the contemporary world.) The teens will not
be allowed to travel back to their current world until they have
followed the path of their fathers and find out what happened to
them. It turns out to be a very dangerous journey.
The
concept of the travel portal has been somewhat overworked in fantasy
novels. A little humor was added this time as the portal sometimes
drops the teens in the oddest places, like on top of a table with one
foot in a bowl of porridge.
The
strength of this novel was character interaction. Chapelway is a teen
and has done a great job with the dialog and thoughts teens have.
There was lots of humor in Chelsea's thoughts. I really enjoyed that.
There
could have been more description as that would have helped
readers picture places and people a little better. I read a digital
version of the book and several chapters were out of order. The
ending of the book is sort of a cliff hanger but I felt it was more
just a stopping point in the story line. I would have liked to see
some resolution, some completion of some aspect of the story, before
the abrupt stop in action.
Chapelway
has great potential. The text could use a little correcting of
grammar. For example, “Brothers … never appreciate the things us
sisters do for them.” (456/3504) Some editing would help the flow
of the work as well. Nonetheless, I applaud the author and look
forward to watching her grow as a creative writer. This would be a good book
for young teens.
I am taking part in a blog tour of this book. You can find links to other reviews and a guest post from the author here.
My
rating: 4/5 stars.
Nicki
Chapelway is the pseudonym of a teenage girl. She enjoys reading,
writing, swimming, and watching TV. She lives in Ohio with her family
of eight and two dogs. She is currently working on the next book in
the series. You can find out more at
http://pausefortales.blogspot.com.
CreateSpace
Independent Publishing, 260 pages. You can buy a copy here.
I received a complimentary digital copy of this book through Celebrate Lit. My thoughts are an independent and honest review.
I received a complimentary digital copy of this book through Celebrate Lit. My thoughts are an independent and honest review.
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