The novel would have benefited from some additional editing. One example is ending one section with the thoughts of Manaheem, a male, and beginning the next section using “he.” It was quite some time before I realized now the he was Barabbas. (2176/3657). And, “The old geyser refused to work for me.” (3332/3657) A young man questions if there is money for college. (2356/3657) While the first university was established in 859, the term college did not come into use until the fourteenth century. And then there is an odd attempt at vernacular. Characters say y' for you and th' for the. Considering the characters in biblical times were not speaking English, “Did j' bring me somepin', Daddy?” (7453657) just does not seem meaningful.
This is a unique novel for readers of biblical fiction and I do recommend it. It contains some good insights into the time of Jesus and early church.
You can read an excerpt here.
My rating: 4/5 stars.
James M Becher is a graduate of Clearwater Christian College and Biblical School of Theology. He was ordained by Church Of God In Christ in 1974 and served in several churches. He met his wife while in ministry service in Venezuela. He began writing his biblical novel while in Venezuela and the second in the series upon returning to the U.S. You can find out more about Becher and his novels here.
Westbow Press, 314 pages.
I received a complimentary digital copy of this book from the author. My comments are an independent and honest review.
(My star ratings: 5-I love it, 4-I like it, 3-It's OK, 2-I don't like it, 1-I hate it.)
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